All Sins Remembered
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anotherbeliever , any remaining mistakes are mine.
Characters: Billy/Dom
Rating: R
Warnings: Maybe a little bit of angst, some strong language, sexual situations
Disclaimer: Lies, all lies.
Author's Note: There are 7 drabbles, 100 words apiece, one for each of the 7 deadly sins.
Author's Pick: Sloth is my favorite! If you don't read any of the others, please read that one.
Feedback: Much appreciated and desired.
Lust – intense or unbridled sexual desire
The bourbon seeped into his system, slowly burning its way through his body and commanding control of his mind, taking him back to their first time together.
After grappling with the lock and tumbling into the darkened flat, they had practically attacked each other. Billy slammed Dom back against the counter and Dom’s legs wrapped around him. Clothes were pushed carelessly out of the way.
The smoky taste of the liquor and the musky flavor of Billy combined to form an exhilarating cocktail that threatened to overtake Dom’s senses.
Powerful thrusts threw him over the edge and into blissful oblivion.
Gluttony – greedy or excessive indulgence
Recovering quickly, Dom untangled himself from Billy’s grip and fell hastily to his knees. He wrapped his lips firmly around Billy’s cock, and began sucking in a smooth, confident rhythm, all the while watching the other man through half-lidded eyes.
Head thrown back in ecstasy, one hand grasped at the counter, while the other tugged roughly at Dom’s hair. Billy, a glutton for the pleasure Dom dealt him, craved more. Words laced thick with desire and guttural moans permeated the otherwise silent flat. With a final jerk and shudder, he reached his release.
Dom hungrily sucked down every sweet drop.
Sloth – disinclination to action or labor
Billy watched idly as Dom lay sprawled across him. Soft puffs of breath from Dom’s slightly open mouth brushed across his chest, stirring the ginger hair there.
He stated matter-of-factly into the air above Dom’s head, “You know, this shagging without ceasing is lovely and all, but eventually the need for nourishment will overcome even our robust libidos. At some point we’re going to have to go out for food.”
“Or,” Dom replied, smirking as he slipped a hand between Billy’s legs, “We could just order take away.”
“Or we could just order take away.” Billy whimpered in helpless agreement.
Greed – a selfish and excessive desire for more of something than is needed
Insatiable, that described him…a right greedy bastard.
His avarice knew no bounds; however much he had, he always thirsted for more. Just one more touch, one more kiss, one more instant together, he lived for those things.
With Rings being finished and the press route complete, those moments came more and more infrequently and every second together was a stolen treasure. Beloved memories played through his head like an old film, flickering unsteadily from one scene to the next.
Every time they had to say goodbye, it chipped away at his soul slowly, breaking him one kiss at a time.
Wrath – strong vengeful anger or indignation
“Fuck you!” Even through the unreliable phone connection, his fury could be easily discerned.
“Fuck me? You’re the one who left me.”
The static cracked and droned in a murmuring reflection of both the physical and metaphysical distance that stretched between them, seemingly extending beyond infinity.
“Well you didn’t really give me a choice in that did you?”
If he noticed the tears that rolled down his cheeks, he made no move to stop them.
“You know I love you,” was his broken reply.
A click and then the buzz of an empty line was all the answer that followed.
Envy – painful or resentful awareness of an advantage enjoyed by another joined with a desire to possess the same advantage
Now, his hand rests on her knee, slides up her thigh.
She gazes adoringly at him, plans of forever evident in her eyes as he gently sweeps her hair away from her face. His thumb traces a tender path down her jaw as he leans in to kiss her. The other man observes this, his jaw tingling with the lost sensations of times past.
Suddenly flashes of the past roar before him…parties, premiers, shoulder touches, a brush of the hand here, a knowing smile there, furtive fucks at various public venues. And all he can do is watch and remember.
Pride – the quality or state of being proud
He could stop this game now if he wished. Flip his cards one by one onto the table, ultimately revealing everything to the other man.
In his current state, it’s tempting to simply drag him into a dark corner away from prying eyes and say those things that refuse to fade into nothingness. Then, before he loses his nerve, pull him into a fiery kiss that conveys all the passion, loss, and love that he feels keenly even now.
He could…but pride won’t let him.
Instead, he takes another sip of bourbon and gives himself over to the bittersweet memories.
I hope that you've all enjoyed my humble contributions today and I can't wait to see what the rest of the month brings!
Author:
nc_shy_gurl Beta:
anotherbeliever , any remaining mistakes are mine.Characters: Billy/Dom
Rating: R
Warnings: Maybe a little bit of angst, some strong language, sexual situations
Disclaimer: Lies, all lies.
Author's Note: There are 7 drabbles, 100 words apiece, one for each of the 7 deadly sins.
Author's Pick: Sloth is my favorite! If you don't read any of the others, please read that one.
Feedback: Much appreciated and desired.
Lust – intense or unbridled sexual desire
The bourbon seeped into his system, slowly burning its way through his body and commanding control of his mind, taking him back to their first time together.
After grappling with the lock and tumbling into the darkened flat, they had practically attacked each other. Billy slammed Dom back against the counter and Dom’s legs wrapped around him. Clothes were pushed carelessly out of the way.
The smoky taste of the liquor and the musky flavor of Billy combined to form an exhilarating cocktail that threatened to overtake Dom’s senses.
Powerful thrusts threw him over the edge and into blissful oblivion.
Gluttony – greedy or excessive indulgence
Recovering quickly, Dom untangled himself from Billy’s grip and fell hastily to his knees. He wrapped his lips firmly around Billy’s cock, and began sucking in a smooth, confident rhythm, all the while watching the other man through half-lidded eyes.
Head thrown back in ecstasy, one hand grasped at the counter, while the other tugged roughly at Dom’s hair. Billy, a glutton for the pleasure Dom dealt him, craved more. Words laced thick with desire and guttural moans permeated the otherwise silent flat. With a final jerk and shudder, he reached his release.
Dom hungrily sucked down every sweet drop.
Sloth – disinclination to action or labor
Billy watched idly as Dom lay sprawled across him. Soft puffs of breath from Dom’s slightly open mouth brushed across his chest, stirring the ginger hair there.
He stated matter-of-factly into the air above Dom’s head, “You know, this shagging without ceasing is lovely and all, but eventually the need for nourishment will overcome even our robust libidos. At some point we’re going to have to go out for food.”
“Or,” Dom replied, smirking as he slipped a hand between Billy’s legs, “We could just order take away.”
“Or we could just order take away.” Billy whimpered in helpless agreement.
Greed – a selfish and excessive desire for more of something than is needed
Insatiable, that described him…a right greedy bastard.
His avarice knew no bounds; however much he had, he always thirsted for more. Just one more touch, one more kiss, one more instant together, he lived for those things.
With Rings being finished and the press route complete, those moments came more and more infrequently and every second together was a stolen treasure. Beloved memories played through his head like an old film, flickering unsteadily from one scene to the next.
Every time they had to say goodbye, it chipped away at his soul slowly, breaking him one kiss at a time.
Wrath – strong vengeful anger or indignation
“Fuck you!” Even through the unreliable phone connection, his fury could be easily discerned.
“Fuck me? You’re the one who left me.”
The static cracked and droned in a murmuring reflection of both the physical and metaphysical distance that stretched between them, seemingly extending beyond infinity.
“Well you didn’t really give me a choice in that did you?”
If he noticed the tears that rolled down his cheeks, he made no move to stop them.
“You know I love you,” was his broken reply.
A click and then the buzz of an empty line was all the answer that followed.
Envy – painful or resentful awareness of an advantage enjoyed by another joined with a desire to possess the same advantage
Now, his hand rests on her knee, slides up her thigh.
She gazes adoringly at him, plans of forever evident in her eyes as he gently sweeps her hair away from her face. His thumb traces a tender path down her jaw as he leans in to kiss her. The other man observes this, his jaw tingling with the lost sensations of times past.
Suddenly flashes of the past roar before him…parties, premiers, shoulder touches, a brush of the hand here, a knowing smile there, furtive fucks at various public venues. And all he can do is watch and remember.
Pride – the quality or state of being proud
He could stop this game now if he wished. Flip his cards one by one onto the table, ultimately revealing everything to the other man.
In his current state, it’s tempting to simply drag him into a dark corner away from prying eyes and say those things that refuse to fade into nothingness. Then, before he loses his nerve, pull him into a fiery kiss that conveys all the passion, loss, and love that he feels keenly even now.
He could…but pride won’t let him.
Instead, he takes another sip of bourbon and gives himself over to the bittersweet memories.
I hope that you've all enjoyed my humble contributions today and I can't wait to see what the rest of the month brings!
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Date: 2009-05-04 04:14 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-04 01:51 pm (UTC)Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment!
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Date: 2009-05-04 11:18 am (UTC)I love the way you write...so engaging and full of wordsmith imagery.
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Date: 2009-05-04 02:00 pm (UTC)Thanks so much for reading it!
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Date: 2009-05-05 08:40 am (UTC)May I friend you so I can keep an eye on your writing?
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Date: 2009-05-05 03:26 pm (UTC)I do feel that it's only fair to warn you though, I don't write much. As a matter of fact, the this is only the second story I've written and the first was put out in September. And when I do write, I don't f-lock it. Also, I won't be online much for the next 3 months or so because I'm going home for the summer and won't have ready access to the internet until I come back to school.
But feel free to friend if you want to; I never turn down new friends. :D
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Date: 2009-05-06 10:13 am (UTC)Only your second story?
Wow!
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Date: 2009-05-05 12:06 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-05 12:56 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-05-05 02:31 pm (UTC)Thanks for the great writing!
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Date: 2009-05-05 03:14 pm (UTC)Of course they'll come back together again. I mean, really, at the end of this fic at least one of them is drunk. And we know what happens when the boys get drunk, heehee.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Btw, can't wait to see what you post!
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Date: 2009-05-07 02:27 am (UTC)Very nice. And I like the concept and how the drabbles weave a story.
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