....hmmmmm. I think this is the only one of my fics that I've listened to and mainly wanted to go, *cringe* *editeditedit*. Not that you didn't do a lovely job with it! Just...what did I think was the point of all those tense changes, again?
D: nooooo! Listen, you might want to do some edits, but it's still a really great fic! I didn't see anything wrong with it. CON FIC FTW, bb. It made me happy and wish that I had been to the first ORC. Sigh. <3
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Date: 2009-05-22 01:56 am (UTC)He has a nagging feeling that humans were never meant to endure the kind of distance now falling away beneath him.
This line still gets me, y'know. Especially now hearing you read it. Lovely job.